Design a BRL-CAD splash screen #3BRL-CAD
Status: ClosedTime to complete: 100 hrs Mentors: Deepak, SeanTags: image, GUI, 2D, design, graphics, logo, splash screenBeginner

BRL-CAD's new modeling interface, archer, displays a splash screen when you start the program.  This is what it currently looks like:

http://svn.code.sf.net/p/brlcad/code/brlcad/trunk/src/tclscripts/archer/images/aboutArcher.png

There are several problems with that image.  It uses our old logo.  It references the wrong website.  It has a massive pointless ""icon"".  It proclaim's archer being trademarked (distracting).

Your task is to design a completely new splash screen that has none of those problems, is visually interesting, optionally incorporates our new logo, and optionally references our main website (brlcad.org).

Check out some of the other design tasks for inspiration.  Make yours look even more impressive, artistically interesting. ;)

Submit your image in whatever raw working format you use (e.g., psd), preferably something with layers in case we need to change anything, but also submit a final png image as well.

 

Uploaded Work
File name/URLFile sizeDate submitted
brlcad.jpg17.1 KBDecember 09 2014 11:54 UTC
combine_images-ConvertImage.psd448.9 KBDecember 10 2014 10:04 UTC
m-ConvertImage.psd1.1 MBDecember 10 2014 12:18 UTC
mukuu.psd1.1 MBDecember 11 2014 10:05 UTC
addtext_com_MDQxMDA1MzM4Mjk5-ConvertImage.psd1.0 MBDecember 11 2014 10:13 UTC
combine_images-ConvertImage.psd641.7 KBDecember 12 2014 06:07 UTC
last try.psd700.7 KBDecember 12 2014 12:28 UTC
combine_images.psd573.1 KBDecember 14 2014 14:18 UTC
Comments
Jayon December 2 2014 01:25 UTCTask Claimed

I would like to work on this task.

Mihai Neacsu on December 2 2014 01:28 UTCTask Assigned

This task has been assigned to Jay. You have 100 hours to complete this task, good luck!

Melange on December 5 2014 05:28 UTCTask due soon

There are less than 24 hours left until the deadline, please submit your work soon.

Melange on December 6 2014 05:28 UTCTask Reopened

Melange has detected that the final deadline has passed and it has reopened the task.

Sashankon December 8 2014 01:24 UTCIncorrect Splash Screen Link?

The current splash screen at the link provided does not match the description provided in the task description in terms of problems. (The image doesn't have trademark on it, it has the current main website) Please let me know if this is the correct reference splash screen. Thanks.

vidushion December 8 2014 06:13 UTCTask Claimed

I would like to work on this task.

Deepak on December 8 2014 06:14 UTCTask Assigned

This task has been assigned to vidushi. You have 100 hours to complete this task, good luck!

vidushion December 8 2014 06:20 UTCClaim Removed

The claim on this task has been removed, someone else can claim it now.

mukul kambojon December 8 2014 12:49 UTCTask Claimed

I would like to work on this task.

Popescu Andrei on December 8 2014 13:05 UTCTask Assigned

This task has been assigned to mukul kamboj. You have 100 hours to complete this task, good luck!

mukul kambojon December 9 2014 11:55 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

Popescu Andrei on December 9 2014 12:21 UTC

Hello, mukul!


 


First of all you should upload the editable format as well (xcf, psd etc)


I suggest you check out some other design tasks for inspiration, but here are some suggestions:


-the background it too powerfully colored, it would make text difficult to write on it.


-you should use our exact logo, rather than just it's resemblance(form, 3 circles)


-the name is BRL-CAD, not BRLCAD


 


I like that your approach is minimal, goodluck on improving it!


 


 

Popescu Andrei on December 9 2014 12:21 UTCTask Needs More Work

One of the mentors has sent this task back for more work. Talk to the mentor(s) assigned to this task to satisfy the requirements needed to complete this task, submit your work again and mark the task as complete once you re-submit your work.

mukul kambojon December 10 2014 10:04 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

Gauravjeet Singh on December 10 2014 10:23 UTCHey mukul

Good going mukul. Well this design could become really interesting and awesome if you consider the following suggestions


First of all you need to get a high quality logo. Get it from http://brlcad.org/wiki/Logo


Secondly prefer simple backgrounds, if you want some textured background, search for some minimal grunge background. Choose some light colored background, and write text with dark color.


You can get some patterns from http://subtlepatterns.com/


Add the link to BRL-CAD website at bottom.

Gauravjeet Singh on December 10 2014 10:23 UTCTask Needs More Work

One of the mentors has sent this task back for more work. Talk to the mentor(s) assigned to this task to satisfy the requirements needed to complete this task, submit your work again and mark the task as complete once you re-submit your work.

mukul kambojon December 10 2014 12:18 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

Sean on December 11 2014 03:11 UTCTask Needs More Work

One of the mentors has sent this task back for more work. Talk to the mentor(s) assigned to this task to satisfy the requirements needed to complete this task, submit your work again and mark the task as complete once you re-submit your work.

Sean on December 11 2014 03:14 UTCartistic appeal

Mukul,


Your designs are interesting, but rather generic in nature.  Plus it looks like you have not put the required effort into your design.  This task should take you several hours minimum.  Please see some of the other completed GCI splash screen tasks to understand what level of quality is expected.  I'm confident you can improve upon your designs with a bit more research.


 

mukul kambojon December 11 2014 10:13 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

Sean on December 11 2014 17:50 UTCstill generic

Mukul, this design is still overly generic and unusable.  If you have questions or need help, please ask how we can help.  Have you looked at some of the other splash screen designs?  Have you tried running any of BRL-CAD's graphical tools to maybe try creating a 3D image you could use in your design?  I can itemize the technical issues with this design, but the overall approach being taken needs to be reconsidered.


Just adding another image on top of this isn't going to work.  Those square boxes around the logo image and the image you just added will not work (and we don't have license to use that image anyways).

Sean on December 11 2014 17:50 UTCTask Needs More Work

One of the mentors has sent this task back for more work. Talk to the mentor(s) assigned to this task to satisfy the requirements needed to complete this task, submit your work again and mark the task as complete once you re-submit your work.

mukul kambojon December 12 2014 06:07 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

mukul kambojon December 12 2014 06:09 UTCsorry

I'm very very sorry for this and i am confident enough to say that you will mark this task as complete. thank you

Ishwerdas on December 12 2014 10:31 UTCTask Needs More Work

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Ishwerdas on December 12 2014 10:34 UTC

I really appreciate your efforts but please carefully read the points mentioned by the mentors who reviewed this task previously and also use better logos, with transparent backgrounds. You can find them here at http://brlcad.org/wiki/logo

mukul kambojon December 12 2014 12:28 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

Melange on December 12 2014 17:05 UTCNo more Work can be submitted

Melange has detected that the deadline has passed and no more work can be submitted. The submitted work should be reviewed.

Sean on December 12 2014 21:25 UTCmukul

Mukul,


Did you design that background?  If you did not, you should provide attribution (i.e., credit) when you create something that is built on the efforts of others.  Otherwise, that is a form of plagiarism and is not acceptable.  Given the generic and promotional nature of that background, I'm going to assume you did not create it.


As that is the dominant visual design element of your proposed splash screen, this will not work.  GCI submissions need to be *original* works, i.e., something that you entirely create.  Using images you find on the web, especially when it's the dominant characteristic of what you're submitting, is not an original work.


I honestly think you should try to draw a picture using pen and paper, scan it in, and submit that as a splash screen design.  You could try to draw our logo or our mascot (a moose).  I hope you'll try again after your time is extended.

Sean on December 12 2014 21:26 UTCTask Needs More Work

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Sean on December 12 2014 21:26 UTCDeadline extended

The deadline of the task has been extended with 2 days and 2 hours.

mukul kambojon December 13 2014 01:19 UTCThank you

Im very much thankful to you that you have extended my time but I wanted to ask from you that can I use ms paint for this purpose?

mukul kambojon December 13 2014 07:21 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

Gauravjeet Singh on December 13 2014 09:15 UTCCouldn't find any new work.

I couldn't find any new design, so there was nothing to review.


Regarding your query, No, you can't use ms paint, You are suggested to use some software package that supports layers like gimp or photoshop. Also ms paint will limit your creativity as it lacks certain features.

Gauravjeet Singh on December 13 2014 09:15 UTCTask Needs More Work

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mukul kambojon December 14 2014 12:31 UTCClaim Removed

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mukul kambojon December 14 2014 12:31 UTCTask Claimed

I would like to work on this task.

Deepak on December 14 2014 12:31 UTCTask Assigned

This task has been assigned to mukul kamboj. You have 100 hours to complete this task, good luck!

mukul kambojon December 14 2014 14:18 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

Gauravjeet Singh on December 14 2014 15:58 UTCHey mukul

I really appreciate your efforts in getting this task well done.


Regarding design, I guess previous review by sean is still valid, read it carefully and then make some great design. Also I noticed that you have complete 4 days left, make the most of it. Don't be in a haste of doing it.

Gauravjeet Singh on December 14 2014 15:58 UTCTask Needs More Work

One of the mentors has sent this task back for more work. Talk to the mentor(s) assigned to this task to satisfy the requirements needed to complete this task, submit your work again and mark the task as complete once you re-submit your work.

Popescu Andrei on December 15 2014 12:40 UTCCompleted

Mukul,


You have clearly put more than enough time and effort into this, probably the most I have seen from any participant!


Please mark your task as "needs review" and I will be closing it.


Well done, I have to say that I really appreciate your will, and I hope you will not stop here, and continue working on the tasks we have.


If you need any kind of help, please join us on IRC, see here on how to  do so : http://brlcad.org/wiki/IRC

mukul kambojon December 18 2014 10:23 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

Gauravjeet Singh on December 18 2014 10:37 UTCTask Closed

Congratulations, this task has been completed successfully.