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Creating Motion Typography video for BRL-CADBRL-CAD
Status: ClosedTime to complete:
72 hrs
Mentors: Sean
BRL-CAD has a lot of great features that can be highlighted. A motion typography video highlighting these features would be a wonderful addition to the front page of website.
This task requires you to create a motion typography video that will convince user to give BRL-CAD a try, it could be titled something like ''x reasons to choose BRL-CAD'' or anything similar (give your creative minds a flight). The video should not be more than 2 minutes.
For inspiration about what a motion typography, see:
- http://vimeo.com/24715531
Uploaded Work
File name/URL | File size | Date submitted | |
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BRL-CAD ..mov | 12.1 MB | December 05 2013 08:09 UTC | |
BRL-CAD ..mov | 12.1 MB | December 05 2013 08:09 UTC | |
BRL-CAD ..mov | 12.1 MB | December 05 2013 08:09 UTC | |
BRL-CAD ..mov | 12.1 MB | December 05 2013 08:09 UTC | |
BRL-CAD ..mov | 12.1 MB | December 05 2013 08:09 UTC | |
BRL-CAD ..mov | 12.1 MB | December 05 2013 08:12 UTC | |
BRL-CAD video.mov | 16.7 MB | December 05 2013 17:48 UTC | |
BRL-CAD video.mov | 16.7 MB | December 05 2013 17:52 UTC | |
BRL-CAD video.mov | 16.7 MB | December 05 2013 17:54 UTC |
I would like to work on this task.
Do we need to narrate?
This task has been assigned to Luke Blue. You have 72 hours to complete this task, good luck!
Kind of hard to create a typography without narration. I suggest narrating yourself and if it's a good story, we can replace the audio later or maybe you'll surprise yourself. Can also get a friend.
If you like, you can write up the story first to get feedback.
Don't know about other mentors, but from my side, it is excellent. However, you may need to put more content into it later but it looks enough to start with.
Take care of spellings and grammatical things.
That is great start and ditto what Harmanpreet said. Excellent start. However, it feels like you cut the story just a little short. You want to end on really strong points and I'd like to not have that be our military connections. The emphasis should be on being free and open source, or that we have a community of contributors around the world, or that BRL-CAD's one of the world's oldest or some other impressive statistic.
You might be able to get some ideas and inspiration from our recent book creation:
http://flossmanuals.net/contributors-guide-to-brl-cad/
You do have numerous spelling, grammar, and other typography errors (capitalization, punctuation, ...), so you will definitely want to correct those. Having typography errors in a typography video ... wouldn't be good as you can probably imagine! :)
Keep track of how long you spend working on the script. We can break this task up into two tasks (one to create the script, a second to create the video) if needed.
Sorry for grammatical errors, I made the script really fast and forgot to pay attention to grammar. Breaking the task would be great as this is long task and making script would take a good amount of time.
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I would like to work on this task.
This task has been assigned to Marie Gita. You have 72 hours to complete this task, good luck!
The claim on this task has been removed, someone else can claim it now.
I would like to work on this task.
This task has been assigned to Marie Gita. You have 72 hours to complete this task, good luck!
The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.
I apologize for uploading the same content several times, i thought the files had not uploaded.
This is what I came up with, I hope it is okay...and suits BRL-CAD
Marie
Good Work Marie Gita. But, it would be great if you can add naration in background or even adding a soft note of some musical tone will make it better.
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I have made changes to the video, it is uploaded as BRL-CAD video.mov
Congratulations, this task has been completed successfully.
A follow-on task has been posted:
http://www.google-melange.com/gci/task/view/google/gci2013/5252967670218752