BRL-CAD has a lot of great features that can be highlighted. A motion typography video highlighting these features would be a wonderful addition to the front page of website.
This task requires you to create a motion typography video that will convince user to give BRL-CAD a try, it could be titled something like ''x reasons to choose BRL-CAD'' or anything similar (give your creative minds a flight). The video should not be more than 2 minutes.
For inspiration about what a motion typography, see:
- http://vimeo.com/24715531
For some context, there is much background information on our website and some documentation materials such as:
- http://www.flossmanuals.net/contributors-guide-to-brl-cad/
- http://brlcad.org/BRL-CAD_Priorities.png
- http://brlcad.org/BRL-CAD_An_Open_Source_Perspective.pdf
- http://brlcad.org/Industry_Diagram.pdf
- http://brlcad.org/VolumeI-Overview.pdf
Submit an avi or online URL to your video, preferably one with and another without voice/sound. Be sure to check out any other completed GCI motion typography tasks for inspiration. Make yours even better. ;)
File name/URL | File size | Date submitted | |
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trim.6B2485D5-2710-43E0-8117-8AC24D300404.MOV | 12.1 MB | December 19 2013 19:02 UTC | |
IMG_1644.mp4 | 11.7 MB | December 20 2013 16:55 UTC | |
IMG_1650.mp4 | 13.3 MB | December 21 2013 12:06 UTC | |
IMG_1655.mp4 | 10.0 MB | December 22 2013 19:51 UTC | |
IMG_1659.mp4 | 6.3 MB | December 23 2013 11:34 UTC |
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This looks interesting, but several critiques:
I suggest watching some more typography examples for inspiration, like these:
http://webdesignledger.com/inspiration/13-inspiring-typography-videos
Lots of good ideas, especially some of the simple ones. If you post a script beforehand, we can review before you spend time setting up the video.
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dear sean,
i would like to thank you for the critiques you gave me on my earlier work. i tried my best to correct all of these errors but if you should find any more errors i will be glad to correct them to the best of my abilities
yours sincerely,
kenneth
Kenneth,
It's getting better, but a few more issues still remain:
In all, the list is getting shorter. Keep it up!
;)
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Kenneth,
My earlier comment is only emphasized now that you added an audio track. You spoke and enunciated beautifully but notice how you have big pauses. For example ...... "with" .... you take about 15 seconds to say 1 word. That doesn't work.
I'm sure you made this audio overlay by watching the video and speaking. If you wrote all of the words down without the animation and created another audio track without watching the video, you wouldn't have the long delays. You don't want to make the audio fit the video. You want the video to match a naturally spoken audio, not the other way around.
Basically the video takes too long to say too little. Some of the transitions are fine but several are way too slow for the few words and delay until the next transition.
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I see you sped up several sections, which is good, but you still have three big pauses in there and one instances of "cad" near the end where it should say "CAD".
Assuming you fix those issues, here are the remaining issues that I see:
The whole video is still a little too slow. You're clearly reading slowly, slower than natural, to compensate. Those transitions where you only speak a few words take far too long.
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Now it's just a little rushed, but it looks better. (10 milliseconds makes a huge difference) Please post the video to Youtube to showcase your work and put the URL here. Thanks for all your efforts Kenneth!
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http://www.google-melange.com/gci/task/view/google/gci2013/5232363101487104