Design a BRL-CAD business card #5BRL-CAD
Status: ClosedTime to complete: 72 hrs Mentors: SeanTags: design, graphics, 2D, 3D, business card

Design a business card for BRL-CAD. These will be cards that community members who got selected in GSOC or in GCI or even for core contributors can give out to others at conferences, meetings, interviews, etc. The design will get filled in with personal information like name, title, phone number, email, maybe a mailing address too.

Submit a one-sided or two-sided design that can be filled in with personal information and sent to a business card printer (or even printed at home).

Designing of BRL-CAD membership cards can be done in LaTeX, GIMP, Photoshop or any other editing software. Please submit your raw working files (e.g., a PSD or XCF with layers) as well as a "preview" example png.

Search the web or other GCI tasks for inspiration, but make sure you only incorporate artwork that we'd have the ability to redistribute without any restriction (look for CC-BY or BSD/MIT license or public domain content), or keep it simple and fully design the card yourself.

Please DO use any of our formal (the three rings) or informal (the moose antlers) logos, include a link to our website in your design, and be sure to put a "dash" in BRL-CAD. Please do NOT create a military-looking theme, use our old eagle logo, or simply copy someone else's design.

Be awesome, be creative, be inspired, be original. ;)

Uploaded Work
File name/URLFile sizeDate submitted
front-side.psd5.8 MBDecember 19 2013 13:14 UTC
back side.psd230.5 KBDecember 19 2013 13:18 UTC
back.psd116.7 KBDecember 21 2013 09:00 UTC
front.psd151.4 KBDecember 21 2013 09:01 UTC
front.psd215.7 KBDecember 21 2013 09:17 UTC
back.psd159.0 KBDecember 21 2013 09:18 UTC
bb.psd49.8 KBDecember 22 2013 17:34 UTC
ff.psd165.9 KBDecember 22 2013 17:35 UTC
ff.psd2.9 MBDecember 23 2013 09:14 UTC
ff.psd2.9 MBDecember 23 2013 09:15 UTC
final front.psd2.9 MBDecember 23 2013 10:00 UTC
final back.psd2.9 MBDecember 23 2013 10:01 UTC
front revised.psd5.5 MBDecember 24 2013 14:50 UTC
back revised.psd4.6 MBDecember 24 2013 14:51 UTC
Comments
AdityaGulation December 17 2013 11:16 UTCTask Claimed

I would like to work on this task.

Gauravjeet Singh on December 17 2013 11:18 UTCTask Assigned

This task has been assigned to AdityaGulati. You have 72 hours to complete this task, good luck!

AdityaGulation December 19 2013 13:19 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

AdityaGulation December 19 2013 15:24 UTCfast reviewal

Pls review fast

Sean on December 19 2013 19:07 UTCreview time

Aditya, tasks are reviewed in the order in which they are received and there are dozens of participants every day actively working, so please be patient.  It may take up to 36 hours to review a task, so all the more reason to get your work right the first time.


Your design seems a little too basic, uninspired, with little to no relation to our project (a computer graphics design system).  Please review some of the other completed design tasks for a comparison of what is possible.  I suggest trying a different approach, something that incorporates graphics beyond a simple gradient.


That said, there are specific issues with your design that will need to be fixed before this design could be considered complete:



  • The font is undesirable.  The serifs contrast with our logo-text font and don't look good.

  • The URLs on the front and back are outright wrong.

  • What is picture supposed to be?  Perhaps provide an example.

  • Gender on a card is inappropriate.

  • There should be a dash between BRL-CAD.

  • The teal blue and maroon colors conflict with the red and black logo colors.


 

Sean on December 19 2013 19:07 UTCTask Needs More Work

One of the mentors has sent this task back for more work. Talk to the mentor(s) assigned to this task to satisfy the requirements needed to complete this task, submit your work again and mark the task as complete once you re-submit your work.

Sean on December 19 2013 19:08 UTCDeadline extended

The deadline of the task has been extended with 1 days and 0 hours.

AdityaGulation December 21 2013 09:02 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

AdityaGulation December 21 2013 09:21 UTCconcerning no. of files

I have uploaded six files in total,so as to provide you with more options.


sincerely,


Aditya Gulati

Melange on December 21 2013 11:20 UTCNo more Work can be submitted

Melange has detected that the deadline has passed and no more work can be submitted. The submitted work should be reviewed.

Sean on December 22 2013 06:08 UTCmessy

With the design you're suggesting, the main logo is really crowded by the other information and there seems to be no order to the layout.  Care to share your thinking?


 

Sean on December 22 2013 06:08 UTCTask Needs More Work

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Sean on December 22 2013 06:08 UTCDeadline extended

The deadline of the task has been extended with 2 days and 0 hours.

Sean on December 22 2013 06:09 UTClook at some of the others

I suggest looking at some of the other completed GCI design tasks too for inspiration or to understand what sort of quality is expected.

AdityaGulation December 22 2013 17:35 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

AdityaGulation December 22 2013 17:42 UTCMy Idea

Sir,


My Idea is to make a simple and appealing card.It should have neccesary info.I have submited you a design.I don't have a good backgroud but according to me the rest should be OK.If you could give me some ideas for the Background I would like it.


 


I have submited two new files


ff represents front.


bb represents back. 


sincierly,


Aditya

Sean on December 22 2013 18:07 UTCgetting better

Aditya, this is looking better.  A simple deisgn is fine and the layout of the text and logo you added look good, but try to be more creative with the background.  At a minimum, that teal blue color is just horrible... :)  I suggest trying colors based on our logo and/or grays so that it doesn't look so washed out.  You could also try some subtle geometric shapes instead of a gradient.  Again, check out some of the other completed designs or do a Google image search for inspiration.


 


 

Sean on December 22 2013 18:07 UTCTask Needs More Work

One of the mentors has sent this task back for more work. Talk to the mentor(s) assigned to this task to satisfy the requirements needed to complete this task, submit your work again and mark the task as complete once you re-submit your work.

AdityaGulation December 23 2013 10:01 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

AdityaGulation December 23 2013 10:09 UTCThe new files ( may be the final ones)

Sir,


I have uploaded 2 new files.I have made three changes in the old files.



  1. I have changed the background to a quite appealing one.

  2. I have increased the size of BRL-CAD's logo.

  3. I have Changed the text color  to black.


The name of the two new files are:-



  • final front for the new front.

  • final back for the new back.


I think you will like the new files.


Sincerly,


Aditya Gulati

Sean on December 23 2013 18:46 UTCgetting better

This is looking better, but a few issues are introduced:



  • Where is the background image from?  (Must have rights to redistribute)

  • The resolution is far too low.  It's currently 369x213.  It should be at least 10x bigger to print well.  Make your template 3900x2200 or some size close to that.  DON'T just scale up what you have -- it will look absolutely horrible that way.  You must design it at a high-resolution from the beginning.

  • BRL-CAD is not an incorporated company, so no "Inc." and even the work BRL-CAD doesn't  need to be part of the address.

  • The "final back" design looks squished horizontally.  The logo nodes should be circles and by changing their scale asymmetrically, you've made them into ovals and the text is compressed.  The text also has hints of white that you didn't remove.

  • The centers of the gear logo circles should be white with this design.

Sean on December 23 2013 18:46 UTCDeadline extended

The deadline of the task has been extended with 1 days and 0 hours.

Sean on December 23 2013 18:46 UTCTask Needs More Work

One of the mentors has sent this task back for more work. Talk to the mentor(s) assigned to this task to satisfy the requirements needed to complete this task, submit your work again and mark the task as complete once you re-submit your work.

AdityaGulation December 24 2013 15:05 UTCThe new files ( may be the final ones)

Sir,


I have uploaded two new files.I have made the following changes:-



  1. I have changed the background to better one.

  2. I have made the resolutions as you suggested.

  3. I have changed the the text color and text allignment.

  4. I have removed the"inc." from BRL-CAD.


The name of the two new files are:-



  • front revised is for the new front.

  • back revised is for the new back.


I think you will like the new files.


Sincerly,


Aditya Gulati

AdityaGulation December 24 2013 15:12 UTCReady for review

The work on this task is ready to be reviewed.

Melange on December 25 2013 06:22 UTCNo more Work can be submitted

Melange has detected that the deadline has passed and no more work can be submitted. The submitted work should be reviewed.

Sean on December 25 2013 11:16 UTCTask Closed

Congratulations, this task has been completed successfully.

Sean on December 25 2013 11:16 UTCwell done

Thank you for all your efforts on the multiple revisions.  This is looking a lot better now.